Bloom downed cheek peaches, I ate and ate and ate my fill, yet my mouth waters still.
YAY! another old work finally finished. I had flowers in Sarah's hair but they were clumsy, so I took them out. Yes I made a crown of stars like in Subtilior's dark fan fic [link] *Note key word "dark" if you like fluffy happy endings don't read this fic. If you happen to secretly root for the villain, like me >:] then you would probably like this story.*
This is really, really phenomenal. The emotions are evident from their faces, and the details, like the crown of stars, his marking on his eyes, Sarah's hair, and her dress, really pull it together. I just adore the thin-ness of his fingers. It somehow adds to his villainnic look. Not to mention, his cloak, and the way it's moving! It looks real, and yet fantastical at the same time. Perfect, my dear. Brava!